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OOC: This is a political thread, please do not post silly mages coming in and destroying the Keldrin House as I like the K-House.
Scene: Continuation of Keldrinian Wars, read to understand

Marius escorted H'Dero through the magnificent opal doors of the Keldrin House. Dancers and musicians were lined at the entrance, waiting to be called upon.

A butler greeted them and asked if they would like their cloaks to be out away. Marius gave the man his, and took H'Dero's to give to the man.

"I believe I'll need to arrange a seating for you, as the Keldrin House is quite full at wartime. I could have you sit in Corderon's spot, which is facing mine."

A bell rang and the two men were ushered to their seats. A poet came out and told a tale of the defeat of the mighty dragon of Celestia. He was applauded and then left, to be replaced by a beautiful musician carrying an ivory lire...

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Saere smiled at the elegantly dressed ladies and the perfumed dandies of the Keldrin House. She struck her lire and played an opening ballad, and sang an old lay known as 'The Fall of Caranduo' which had been passed down in her family for many centuries. She finished and was awarded with tremendous applause. A few of the dukes and lords were blushing red, and her eyes travelled along them as she curtsied.

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Silver smiled at the lovely performance. Being part of the Keldrin House does have its advantages, Silver thought happily. The Beautiful woman went backstage and Silver decided to follow her. He got up, walked to the stage..

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H'Dero enjoyed the gathering so far. While the young woman was performing, he noticed something familiar about her. Have I seen her before? he thought. He strained his memory for her. He couldn't think of anything. He shrugged, as the meeting continued...

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Saere threw a mischevious look over her shoulder and blew the assembled lords a kiss, then dissapeared off-stage. One man was making his way to the stage, and she frowned. She noticed that he walked with a considerable limp, and he favoured his left ribs. Oh no, not again... she thought...

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Silver stood and waited outside Saere's dressing room. When she came out, she was in a flowing evening dress, and looked like she was prepared to leave. Silver smiled, she looked amazingly beautiful. "We meet again Saere," he spoke softly...

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Saere emerged from her luxurious (and well-appointed) dressing room. She had dressed in a silk gown that she had saved in her small box of treasures that resided in her bedroom, situated in the corner of Keldrin. She was ready to go out and spend the rest of her evening among some decent lords and ladies, when a soft voice mumbled a greeting beside her. She turned her head and found herself startlingly close to the knight, Silver.
"What are you doing here, paladin!" she demanded, sharply. "Do you have no courtesy to wait for me to at least enter the court?"

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SILVER POST HERE U most handsome of all men! I want you! PLEASE!

Got ya back Rummy Hmm... I want you - Silver

Stop editing posts, or I make this look really bad for you two... Like I already did...

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LOL @ Rumble.

hmm, I don't see an opportunity to use either of my characters yet....feel free to refer to them in the third person so I can bring them in somehow...

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NOOO! MY POST WAS EDITED!

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Moderator's abusing editing powers

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OT: Strider wants Silver? hmmmm.

LOL @ Strider/Silver.

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I see the Last edited by Rumble on... There Rummy... You sick little...

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bleh
it shouldnt do that until 2 people edit lol

NOW POST ON THE RAID

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ahem.

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Saere needs to hire a "travelling companion" like women did in olden days...an older woman who will protect her reputation and fight off naughty, naughty boys with evil, evil thoughts.

***walks off whistling***

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Goldy, if you would just give me your damn ICQ...

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you had it.

no wonder i havent seen you on. I must have your old one.

here: (btw, Rumble has it too)

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Out Of Character:

I can't RP right now because I don't have a character. DarkSword, you need to get cleared by Strider first.

Your character has some messed up values, plus your post throws the whole story out of focus. You are preparing for a battle? This isn't a war. We are in a political setting, not a raging fight setting.

Second, you are waayy too godly. Keldrinite Long Sword? Plus, you see many people in armor? These people are mostly politicians, not warriors.

Your backstory says you were born in the Uber Zone.

Bull****. You can't be born in the uber zone. What, some lovely lady was able to entrance a uber into having a baby with her? Not happening.

Your SkillSet says you are competent at "everything else". Again, what are you, a god?

Your signature habit is to kill anything. Pffffft.

Your virtues and flaws don't have point numbers on them.

You have a ripoff of the admin armor as a concept.

Your backstory is short. It needs to be 20 pages long with the kind of powers you are giving yourself.

You don't have a character type at all.

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Darksword slew yet another House member. "This bites." he said. Darksword the entered Ethren for some relaxation. He was instantly surronded by thieves. He glided out, and use Dimensionrift on them. After the blast, he raided rhe bodies. He then left Ethren. He set up camp near the boat.

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Never seen Saddy Get THAT mad. But I wholy agree. This is a interesting story otherwise. I want it to continue Uninterupted.

Exert from the RULES from tribesroleplaying

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Your character has to have a past. You can make it whatever you want, keeping in mind the Four Tenets, but the backstory should definitely explain your Concept. How Ikharos Jade became a "Rebellious Duelist" for the Blood Eagle should be an interesting story in and of itself. Here are some rules of thumb for how to build your backstory.
MAJOR RULE: The more competent the character, the more detailed the backstory.
The major rule is: the more powerful your character is, the more complex and detailed your background story -- or backstory -- must be. For instance, if you play an Child of Phoenix whose concept is "Elite warrior seeking his lost wife," your backstory should feature a two-page explanation about how he acquired his incredible combat skills. You may want to include mention of the warrior's enemies and allies, NPCs he'd be likely to meet in a story.

However, if you want to play a character who can rip powered armor apart with his bare hands and outthink the Immortals, you'd better write the equivalent of a 90,000 word novel to lay out your hero's story. In theory, anyway. In practice, no one will read it unless you're a very skilled storyteller, and the character would be overkill for RP purposes. Someone whose character is a demigod will quickly find that few people want to play with him.

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